October 9, 2014

Once Upon a Time

An opening line for any book is key to understanding the book.  Observe almost any opening sentence and you will find out a lot about the novel.  These sentences are the most important point to any book, because with them, you begin a new journey.

"Mrs Rachel Lynde lived just where the Avonlea main road dipped into a little hollow, fringed with alders and ladie's eardrops, and traversed by a brook that had its source away back in the woods of the old Cuthbert place; it was reputed to be an intricate, headlong brook in its earlier course through those woods, with dark secrets of pool and cascade; but by the time it reached Lynde's hollow it was a quiet, well-conducted little stream, for not even a brook could run past Mrs Rachel Lynde's door without due regard for decency and decorum; it probably was conscious that Mrs Rachel Lynde was sitting at her window, keeping a sharp eye on everything that passed, from brooks and children up, and that if she noticed any-thing odd or out of place she would never rest until she had ferreted out the whys and wherefores thereof."
Can you guess this book?  That's right, this is Anne of Green Gables by Lucy Maud Montgomery.  Notice how the whole thing is only one sentence?  This shows us that Anne of Green Gables is on the more wordy side of the page, filled with description and great character development.  Before the story has even started, we know exactly what kind of person Mrs Lynde might turn out to be and we want to know what kind of trouble she will try to solve.

How about this one, do you recognize it?

"Mr and Mrs Dursley, of number four, Privet Drive, were proud to say that they were perfectly normal, thank you very much."
 Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone by J. K. Rowling begins in this way.  The author and her characters want to be perfectly understood that the Dursleys are normal, which leads us to believe that everyone else is not.  This, of course, is indeed the point the residents of Privet Drive wish to make, and Rowling succeeds in proving that no one is normal.

"In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit."
When you first read J.R.R. Tolkien's, The Hobbit, he leaves you wondering what a hobbit could possibly be and why its in a hole in the ground.  Little do we guess from the first ten words that this "hobbit" will be such a famous legend in Middle Earth and our own world.  We merely sit there thinking, "What's a hobbit?"  Tolkien piqued our curiosity, so of course we will turn the page to find out exactly what's going on.  This is one of the best opening lines in the history of novel writing.

"If you were going to give a gold medal to the least delightful person on Earth, you would have to give that medal to a person named Carmelita Spats, and if you didn’t give it to her, Carmelita Spats was the sort of person who would snatch it from your hands anyway."
This is the opening sentence from The Austere Academy by Lemony Snicket. Snicket has this particular way of writing that beats around the literary bush, and you can never tell where he'll end up  taking you.  Snicket's opening sentence proves to his readers that he is going to blindfold you, spin you around and around and around, and let you try to find the right direction.  That's why it is called The Series of Unfortunate Events.

 And for your further perusal and enjoyment, try these other opening lines.  Can you see how much they affect the mood/story/flow of the book, or do they start so randomly that you can hardly see the connections?  What are some of your favorite opening lines?


Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my own life, or whether that station will be held by anybody else, these pages must show. David Copperfield, by Charles Dickens
Scarlett O'Hara was not beautiful, but men seldom realized it when caught by her charm as the Tarleton twins were. Gone With The Wind, by Margaret Mitchell
There was no possibility of taking a walk that day. Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte.
When Mr. Bilbo Baggins of Bag End announced that he would shortly be celebrating his eleventy-first birthday with a party of special magnificence, there was much talk and excitement in Hobbiton. The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien
In an old house in Paris that was covered with vines lived twelve little girls in two straight lines. Madeline by Ludwig Bemelmans
It was a dark and stormy night. A Wrinkle in Time by Madeleine L'Engle

      October 7, 2014

      North and South ~ A Book Review


      North and South
      Book By Elizabeth Gaskell
      Review by Janelle A. Spiers
      September 17, 2014

      “ ‘I wanted to see the place where Margaret grew to what she is, even at the worst time of all, when I had no hope of ever calling her mine.’ ” ~ Mr. Thornton, Chapter LII

      “He is my first olive: let me make a face while I swallow it.” ~ Margaret Hale, Chapter XXI

      WARNING:  Please be aware that if you continue reading this Book Review, you may be subject to reading spoilers and or secrets of the original book.  However, all attempts shall be made to hide the crucial points, in the event that this review encourages you to read this book.  Any information divulged will be deemed by the author of this review necessary to the review, or, not capable of ruining any major surprise. 


                  North and South, written by Elizabeth Gaskell, is the story of Ms. Margaret Hale, a pretty country girl from Southern England, and Mr. John Thornton, a diligent factory owner from Northern England.  When their paths cross and their stories begin to tangle, they learn to overcome their differences in opinion and character and prove to themselves and each other what potential they have to face their problems.
                  Subtly, and quite intricately, Gaskell weaved many significant themes into her writing.  There is a strong theme of sacrifice seen mostly by Margaret Hale, as she struggles to care for the poor and orphaned folk of a poor manufacturing town.  Loyalty to one’s family and relations is emphasized as important, but there is also a theme of overcoming pride.  Misunderstandings and different opinions taint the eyes through which the characters look, and so they must come to realize where their prejudice has led them.  And then there is also the theme of love, which Gaskell painted beautifully into the English landscape of North and South.
                 
      The story of North and South is a touching story of clashing opinions, loyalty, and romance.  Margaret Hale, born to a vicar and a lady, is a beautiful woman, but the way she carries herself portrays haughtiness, which frustrates a love-struck Mr. Thornton, whom she meets after she and her family must move from their home in the country to the smoggy industrial city of Milton.
      Mr. Thornton, a rich factory owner, works diligently to provide for his mother and sister, and restores them from absolute poverty to a more comfortable living.  Margaret Hale finds Mr. Thornton to be very disagreeable and cold-hearted towards his employees, but what she does not know is the struggle Mr. Thornton goes through to look into the well being of his factory workers.  As Milton is plunged into a factory strike and a fearsome mob, Margaret’s dear parents die, and as tension in the industry begins to threaten the happiness of both Mr. Thornton and Ms. Hale, each are forced to rely on the other for help, and it takes such hardships for them learn to understand the other’s heart and their own.

      Margaret Hale is the protagonist character of North and South.  She has a compassionate heart towards any person less fortunate than herself, but she has very little tolerance for those in a position of authority.  She has a fault of prejudice but a gift of tenderness and loyalty to her family.  Margaret is a memorable character in her manner of speech and action.
      Mr. Thornton, in relation to the main character, is the antagonist at the beginning of the story.  Margaret dislikes him, and he is often the means of keeping her from happiness, however, Mr. Thornton has a very great heart. He is earnest and kind to his family and those he cares for, but he has learned to be firm and strict with his factory workers and is often looked upon as being cold.  Mr. Thornton’s fault that he cannot take criticism without offense and often broods upon such comments, especially when they come from Ms. Hale.

      The supporting characters of North and South are each an important role.  Mrs. Thornton is the mother of the hero, and she is a very bold, outspoken, strong woman who loves her son and hates anyone who makes him sad.  The passion of her love for her son is touching, and her air is foreboding to those who cross her.  Mr. and Mrs. Hale are weaker, older parents who have poor health but loving hearts.  Mr. Hale is supportive of his family and struggles to be a means of providing for them.  Mrs. Hale has a delicate health, and it is weakened by her worry for her exiled son, to the point that the doctor has no hope for the poor woman.
      Then there are the townspeople of Milton, including Nicholas and Bessy Higgins.  The father and daughter had given up hope for Bessy’s survival.  When she contracted consumption in the cotton mill, she grew weaker and longed for death.  Once befriended by Margaret, hope began to lighten their eyes, and upon Bessy’s death, Margaret grew to be a great comfort to Nicholas as he mourned for his dead daughter. 
      Mr. Bell is the godfather of Margaret and Frederick Hale, and it was by his hand and suggestion that the Hales moved to Milton.  He provided for Margaret when her father died and left all he had to her, which made her a great landowner in Milton.  His good-natured heart blessed the young woman in her time of distress, and they grew very fond of each other.

      The quality of writing is exquisite, and Gaskell did a wonderful job of embracing the different ideas, thoughts, and dialects of various classes of people.  She weaves a wonderful speech by the educated Margaret, an honest and frank conversation from Mr. Thornton, and the uncouth, uneducated talking of the Higgins’.  Her words paint a pretty picture, and her description is sincere and light.  However, being published in 1855, the English that we speak nowadays is quite outdated, and so many of the idioms, phrases, and words have lost their understandability.  Depending on the reader, North and South may be hard to understand, especially when the uneducated characters speak.
      North and South was published in a magazine called, Household Works, in a 20 part series, edited by Charles Dickens, in 1854.  It was not until the next year that it was published as a book, and Gaskell added other pieces to the printed copy because she was unable to write and develop the story as much as she wished in the magazine.
      Elizabeth Gaskell was born in Chelsea, London, England on the 29th of September 1810.  Her writing career began in 1836 when she and her husband wrote a collection of poems, and her work was often published through various magazines and newspapers.  Gaskell was a close friend to Charlotte Bronte and she worked with Charles Dickens, he being the editor for North and South.

      The worldview of this novel is Christian, with a strong placement of faith in God and his goodness.  Mr. Hale is a pastor, and he is seen to pray several times with his family.  There is also a small element of Atheism from Nicholas Higgins, who has never been encouraged in any other religious faction but his own.
      There is no profanity or language in North and South.  All of the characters have clean mouths, but they do gossip and speak openly about their frustrations toward other characters at times.  The subject of sex is also non-existent.  A small alcohol addiction is seen from one of the characters, but he typically drinks when he is greatly unhappy, and when this struggle is made clear, the character is strongly encouraged to reform and does make an effort to try.
      There is a brief chapter in which there is a bit of violence. A mob attacks the Thornton home, and in the process wounds Margaret Hale when a rock is thrown at her, but there is no graphic description.  Death also occurs, later in the story, to several characters.  They die either from illness or old age, although one man dies while intoxicated, and another is alluded to having committed suicide by drowning himself in the river.
      The plot of this book is well planned, and it is carried through to a very solid ending.  Each of Gaskell’s characters also remains steady, according to their original personality.  Although several of the characters are seen to grow in maturity, understanding, or character, they remain constant.  The quality is also continually good.

      The story of North and South is captivating and enjoyable.  Gaskell’s characters are even more so, filled with life, longing, and love.  Mr. Thornton and Margaret Hale take a place in the hearts and minds of their readers, and they will always be dear classic characters.  From Hampshire to London, the journeys of the beautiful Margaret Hale will be loved and cherished.  From poverty to a rich factory owner, Mr. Thornton’s perseverance will continue to encourage us, embolden us, and live on forever. 

      Theme ~ Positive! (For topics that are worth pondering and pursuing.)
      Plot Line ~ Positive! (The story line is easy to follow and also pleasant read.)
      Characters ~ Positive! (For memorable, lovable characters with human qualities.)
      Writing Quality ~ Undetermined! (For understandability: the readers must determine this for themselves.)
      Mature Content ~ Positive! (For clean, wholesome, and non-graphic writing.)
      Congruency ~ Positive! (The joints of this book are very smooth.)

      The total score for North and South by Elizabeth Gaskell is 5.5 out of a possible 6 positive points.




      October 2, 2014

      To Love or Be Loved ~ Finis

      And the final conclusion to the freeverse novella, To Love or Be Loved.

      To Love or Be Loved ~ Part 1

      To Love or Be Loved ~ Part 2

      To Love or Be Loved ~ Part 3





      Marjorie J. Riley


      Finders, Keepers
      Will and Helen come today, to see where I
      have been. I am touched that Will noticed. I
      look into his brown eyes, but my mind is on
      blue. John tiptoes          down the stairs,
      peering at my                 guests. “Will, Helen,
      I’d like you to                meet John.” Helen
      looks horrified and stares like the moon.
      Will’s eyes flash envied brown. “You won’t
      keep him.” “Oh yes, I will.” Precious blue.


      Something Old and Something New
      Ann brought in a bundle of little boy clothes.
      ears filled her eyes as her arms clutched her
      son’s old things.          “If you plan on keeping
      him, Miss, he’ll           need something new to 
      wear.” Do I plan        on keeping him? I told
      Will I would, but         was I serious? I look at
      John, splashing in the tub, smiling from tiny
      ear to tiny ear. “Thank you, Ann.  Johnny will
      need them.” Johnny? I called him such a
      tender name. How could I give him away?

        
      Hide and Seek
      “Marjee? Find me!” I look behind an
      armchair. John giggles when I find him.
      “Marjee? Find me!” I see a lump in the
      Persian rug. He squeals when I hug him.
      “Marjee? Find me!” I find him lying on the
      stairs. He shouts when I tickle him.
      I realize that something has happened. Inside
      me, there is no hole. “Johnny? You found
      me!” His eyes blink blue and  his lips smile,
      almost if he knew what he did to my heart.


      To Love and Be Loved
      I don’t know why I decided to keep John. I
      just did. I don’t know why I love him. I just
      do. John has changed me. I know how to feel
      loved and I know how to love. Maybe this is
      the love Father always talked about. Love fills
      the hole in your heart. Johnny has filled the
      hole in my heart. Oh, how sweet to love and
      be loved.